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Post by Enox Black on Apr 12, 2009 18:47:15 GMT 1
Age:18
Eyes: bright blue
Hair: Short and Brown, though he usually has a hat
Face Description: Adventurous scar over left eye
Body Description: 5'11 well muscled
Strengths: good with swords,woman and children
Weaknesses: Is terryfied of balevrines
Animal Companion: dog named Ace
Moral Standing: Good, for the most part
Weapon of Choice: Longsword
Skill of Choice: Strength, with a touch of Will
Born: Born in knothole Glades
Family: Shortly after being born the white balevrine attaced and kid his family
Character History:After his family got killed his Godfather come and took him to the guild to learn the ways of Heroes
Personality: Nice, Fun Loving, Charming.
Sample RP: As the blood of the innocent woman floods the street Enox yells as he run to go impale the beast when out of nowhere he is launched back. He looks up and impales the balevrine.
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Logan Gyre
Hero 
[M:854]
Mayor Of Bowerstone
Posts: 63
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Post by Logan Gyre on Apr 12, 2009 19:23:53 GMT 1
Try using past tense instead of present, eg As the blood of the innocent woman began to flood the street, Enox yelled and ran to go impale the beast when from out of nowhere he was launched backwards. He looked up and impaled the balverine.
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Post by Enox Black on Apr 12, 2009 19:28:03 GMT 1
k thanks how long does it take to get ur character accepted
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Post by Megan Mexere on Apr 12, 2009 19:55:54 GMT 1
We write in past tense on the site. Change it and message me when it's changed and I'll accept it.
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Post by Enox Black on Apr 13, 2009 1:19:25 GMT 1
Age:18
Eyes: bright blue
Hair: long brown
Face Description: Adventurous scar over left eye
Body Description: 5'11 well muscled
Strengths: good with swords,woman and children
Weaknesses: Is terryfied of balevrines
Animal Companion: dog named Ace
Moral Standing: Good, for the most part
Weapon of Choice: Longsword
Skill of Choice: Strength, with a touch of Will
Born: Born in knothole Glades
Family: Shortly after being born the white balevrine attaced and kid his family
Character History:After his family got killed his Godfather come and took him to the guild to learn the ways of Heroes
Personality: Nice, Fun Loving, Charming.
Sample RP:As the blood of the innocent woman began to flood the street, Enox yelled and ran to go impale the beast when from out of nowhere he was launched backwards. He looked up and impaled the balverine.
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Post by Selena Darkheart on Apr 13, 2009 1:38:07 GMT 1
hey, enox, next time just edit the previous post. It should be fine for now though.
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Post by Enox Black on Apr 13, 2009 1:59:50 GMT 1
k
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Post by Selena Darkheart on Apr 13, 2009 2:25:21 GMT 1
One last thing. I know I'm being a bag, bet please refrain from using text, Im,
or "l33t" speak.
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Post by Megan Mexere on Apr 13, 2009 21:33:30 GMT 1
Accepted. Make sure to tell the Guild master what you would like to be. A Bandit, Hero, or Citizen.
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David G. Fairfax
Hero
Hobbologist[M:949]
The Proud Mayor of Barrow Fields and Studier of Hobbes.
Posts: 206
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Post by David G. Fairfax on Apr 15, 2009 12:57:35 GMT 1
is it just me or does this look very similar to my application, words like "Strengh, with a touch of will" and "usaly weres a hat" or "Good, for the most part", I'm not really mad (Infact quite flattered someone thinks it's that good) I just find it interesting is all.
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David G. Fairfax
Hero
Hobbologist[M:949]
The Proud Mayor of Barrow Fields and Studier of Hobbes.
Posts: 206
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Post by David G. Fairfax on Apr 15, 2009 12:59:22 GMT 1
found another "Nice, fun loving, charming"
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Post by Selena Darkheart on Apr 15, 2009 23:09:38 GMT 1
wow... you are right... but then again, most of the applications are similar, but not this similar.
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